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Decrepitude

Decrepitude

Photography Photography \ Architecture | 05/20/07 @882 | GuillaumeLeTual | Comments critiques (20) | Views views (389)


Decrepitude
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As I traveled in the field, "hunting" wildlife photography at sunset, the view of this abandoned barn, in a state of complete decrepitude, was particularly interesting.

On this crooked structure, the middle part of the roof is curved inward by at least 3-4 feet of what would be a "leveled" roof !

In those open plains, with few trees, the wind is particularly strong! At each burst of wind, it looks like this metal sheet roof could take off.

*Edit #1: Added a new version with no cable in the downloads. Please tell me which you prefer.

*Edit #2: Switched the "no cable" version as the main one. The original before edit is available in the downloads.
The eye definitely focus more on the main subject without that cable in the air, which is distracting the eye. That cable could be useful to lead the eye to a focal point, but there is not much interest where it leads, so it's gone now . :)
 
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Avatar Mert

 05/20/07 @893

Just wonderful colors and composition! Good angle! Top marks!
 
Avatar Poohblah

 05/20/07 @926

Reminds me of the series Tommy did! Good job!
 
Avatar danheacock

 05/20/07 @927

Wonderful work, I actually took a barn photo the other day that resembles this old barn...I think I like yours better than mine! No crits!
 
Avatar Rado-Vleugel

 05/21/07 @974

Great shot, great lighting! The way I like it...
 
Avatar eshine

 05/21/07 @980

Very very nice, composition, the richness of the colours and the exposure, all very well done! top marks !!! :)

PS - sure do wish that cable wasn't there though!
 
Avatar Madanapale

 05/21/07 @035

Beautiful lighting and mood!....well done!
Carlos
 
Avatar Jafus

 05/21/07 @042

Great capture..! The cable on the right a bit discracting to me
 
GuillaumeLeTual

 05/21/07 @070

Thanks alot for the critiques and comments!

I Added a new version with no cable in the downloads. Please tell me which you prefer.
 
Avatar workster

 05/21/07 @104

Nice angle, composition and lighting. I like the no-cable version better.
Don
 
GuillaumeLeTual

 05/21/07 @159

Edit#2: Changed the main version to the "no cable" image.

All your comments are very appreciated!
Guillaume
 
Avatar Hysteria

 05/21/07 @611

Yep, no cable is better, Very nice capture. Love it!
 
Avatar Daykan

 05/21/07 @727

Very nice capture!!
 
Avatar OnPix-Artist

 05/21/07 @847

Really nice work ! Good compo !
 
Avatar moserArtist

 05/21/07 @890

Cool!
Very moody!
 
Avatar Joe-Ayotte

 05/22/07 @126

Definately my favourite of your shots so far! Beautiful stuff! Maybe opening the cropping up just a wee bit to allow a bit more of the scenery around to be visible. Still good as-is though, nice work!
 
Avatar blackshad

 05/22/07 @521

great picture
the colors are nice, and subject too
nice choice about the time of the day
+9
 
Avatar Lisbeth

 05/22/07 @667

very nice mood ~ +9/9
 
Avatar Martins

 05/23/07 @357

great mood, amazing sky!!
Welldone ;)
 
Avatar Slapo

 05/27/07 @414

I think getting rid of the cable has helped quite a bit.
Maybe using a 'darker' gradient ND filter would help too.
 
GuillaumeLeTual

 05/28/07 @237

Thanks for the comments.

A darker gradient would certainly make it more dramatic, I like the idea, it’s worth a try.

 
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